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Dream "man"'s Stage: Review 3: Adventures of kitty man

November 5th, 2008, 10:25 am

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Reply Terminal Devastation, November 5th, 2008, 10:30 am
(I saw a mirror of this one here on SJ but I can't seem to find it...)

This comic hadn't been updated in a while, but since I was asked to review it I'm going to review it, who know this review may jump start it alive again. The plot, well the basic premise of the comic is decent enough to actually work, but the delivery isn't so good. The comic jumps around a bit, which is okay, but you tend to jump oddly, and made a sudden switch between future and present plot lines (speaking timeline wise). Whats really killing the comic is the overuse of fillers. One really shouldn't start with a filler, ever. A Title page is alright. Fillers should only really be used to make up a day for comics with a clear update schedule greater than once a month. And of course holidays and specail events. Notice of a hiatus is also okay as long as most of the comic isn't fillers. As a general rule, if the comic is more than 1/3 filler you're likely using far too many of them. Sprite wise the comic isn't bad, its not masterful, but it's around average-just above average.

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User's Comments:

Reply AkumaTh, November 5th, 2008, 11:54 am

The Dream "man" Stage being used as a review is a pretty good idea. Like MST3000.

Reply Terminal Devastation, November 6th, 2008, 10:05 am


Reply Destinytail0, July 20th, 2010, 2:02 pm

Amen XD

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